Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Artist name graphic, Converse branding – lots of nice touches before even pressing play on this! There is the basis of an excellent video here. Mise-en-scene at beginning works well – photos, location, diary. Check the focus in places – a little blur is fine but you need to make sure it focuses in correctly before cutting away. Font for the credits at end is excellent – worth considering for opening of video? I think it could work along with the footwear brand? Shot on the street is weaker – can you do anything in post-production here? Effects? Slow motion? Black and white? Or re-shoot that section with more shots perhaps. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. Good song choice Nice fon...