Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

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1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

  • Great artist name + first slide- superb concept! 
  • i agree it fits the genre- excellent justification
  • clear research into music video conventions which influences the concept. Great to see!
  • Clear plan to performance element and this I built into structure
  • Excellent idea for shoe sponsor- weaving it into the narrative is such a good concept!
  • I like the music magazine title!
  • Music language- good point on phone, are these other effects you can use to give it a personal, nostalgic feel? You allude to this in next slide on colour grading
  • Excellent ideas for Mis-en-scene
  • Some really interesting ideas for representation and identity- great opportunity to expand on this in statement of intent
  • Some good points on audience engagement and pleasures
  • great to see industry and convergence addressed, this is a brilliant presentation! could perhaps have slightly less text on slides and more delivery to class but overall this is excellent
Q+A
  • Nice question on psychographics- links it to pop genre and mainstream
  • Question on setting not as helpful but hadn't it well add then adds value Excellent!

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.
www: i think i communicated my concept well to my classmates and covered a lot by doing research. I also practised the timings so my presentation ass smooth and not as awkward

EBI: i should have reduced the writing on screen because no one had time to read it all

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 
I think my concept was approved by my class but i will update my statement of intent to justify indie pop as mainstream . My concept is achievable and meets the brief. I do need to add media terminology and theories into my statement of intent to further support the arguments i make.

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