Video rough cut learner response

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 Feedback:

  • There are some great elements here – a good narrative, performance elements, nice visual effects. The overall video feels like it fits the song really well which is such an important aspect.
  • The brand identity and shoe sponsorship elements are huge strengths – I really like the way you’ve integrated into the narrative.
  • I love the video effect on the friendship narrative element but do you have enough footage for those sections? It feels like some of the locations outstay their welcome a little – is that an area you could add to for the final cut? You may also want to consider additional effects on those sections to really ramp up the nostalgic feel.

Improvements: 
  • Changing the ending: with more editing 
  • Adding another performance at the first location 
  • Adding more locations and cutting the other scene to make the video more fast paced

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